Essay help, Please--Englishers?

OK, i’m really looking for some people that KNOW the process of what makes a great college essay and could do some editing for me. Would any of you be willing to do so? I would appreciate this a great deal and I could edit yours if need be as well. Please e-mail me at <a href="mailto:scm007@gmail.com">scm007@gmail.com</a> if you would be willing. Thanks.

Also, I did some scientific research in Biochemistry last summer, and I want to stress how important that was and how much I actually did (not just lab aid, etc.) However, I don’t really ahve any good anecdotal stories about my experiences, so all of my main essays have been about other stuff. What should I do?

<p>bump please.</p>