I would appreciate comments on my essay. I actually changed one written for an earlier prompt and altered it to fit with the common app prompt about taking a risk. Please email me if you are feeling kind. <a href="mailto:tman27615■■■■■■■■■■■■">tman27615■■■■■■■■■■■■</a>
Also, I can include the original essay if that will help. Thanks guys.