Essay help please?

<p>Is there anyone who would be willing to read my Common application and CALS supplmement essay and give me some constructive criticism? My writing skills aren't wonderful, so anything that anyone has to say would be nice. Thanks</p>

<p>I'm also applying to CALS. I'd be happy to read your essays and offer whatever help I can. Just PM them to me.</p>

<p>I would gladly help and give you feedback. PM it over.</p>

<p>I just sent in my application for CAS ED last week. I'll take a look if you'll PM them to me.</p>