Essay help - started web app used by millions

<p>Hey Guys, </p>

<p>I’m writing my essay about a business I started last year, that ended up being used by about 30 million people. </p>

<p>I’m not going to post it here, because I don’t want the name of the site to show up on Google attached to a teenager for obvious reasons.</p>

<p>I’m looking for help and advice on what I have so far. </p>

<p>Any help is greatly appreciated. I can PM you a link to the essay.</p>

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<li>Nick</li>
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<p>I have a lot of experience editing college essays, I would be willing to read it over and give you some advice.</p>