Essay: help with a sentence

<p>, “its just, I was so ****in’ angry all the time.” </p>

<p>VS</p>

<p>, “its just, I was so [ferociously] angry all the time.” </p>

<p>Context. Take from tattoos on the heart. To quote the person acknowledging their true feelings.</p>

<p>You don’t have to quote people exactly. You definitely shouldn’t do the square bracket thing, but you could replace it with a “lighter” swear word (but it still has to be an actual swear word on some level…not anything too cheesy).</p>

<p>For example:</p>

<p>“It’s just that I was so goddamn angry all the time.” </p>

<p>“It’s just that I was so…angry all the time.” </p>

<p>The comma you have after “just” is kind of weird.</p>

<p>If you choose to use the original word, I think “*<strong><em>ing” sounds better than “</em></strong>*in’.” :)</p>