Essay help? Would somebody mind reading my two essays?

College Essays
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<p>I’m applying to the University of Wisconsin–Madison and am having trouble with my essays.
One of them is something that goes unnoticed and why its important to you.
The other is why I decided to apply and what I’m going to do there and if anything has impacted my choices.</p>

<p>Would somebody mind reading through my drafts, please?</p>

2

<p>Please?
10 char.</p>

3

<p>i can take a look over them. Just PM me them.</p>

4

<p>Bump?
10 char.</p>

5

<p>Please?
10 char.</p>

6

<p>I don’t mind looking at them!</p>

7

<p>I don’t mind reading them! PM me. :)</p>