<p>well i just got defferred from brown and am kinda dissapointed. Anyways I was finishing up my other apps and I saw my essay for brown agin I was just wondering if on some of the parents could look it over and tell me what u think. Even though my english teacher told me it was great I feel it might have been too cliche or something. I wanted to use it for my other apps but im not sure anymore.</p>
<p>If you could please give me your email address I would really appreciate it.</p>
<p>Thanks.</p>