<p>I recently finished my 3rd draft. But I completely changed the tone of my second draft. I hope I can get some advice on them. They are about 350, 400 words. Thank you.</p>
<p>I could look them over if you don’t mind waiting until tomorrow evening for my reply. You may either PM or email me.</p>
<p>I’ll take a crack at it, but keep in mind I’m a serious critic.</p>