Essay Help

<p>Ok, so I've taken the SAT 3 times now and next week is the last time I'm going to take it. My highest score on the essay was a 9, and the next two times I got 8s.</p>

<p>I'm not really sure what I'm doing wrong. Looking over my March essay(the one about leaders being held to different standards), I guess my opening paragraph was pretty weak and it did not really have any examples. </p>

<p>But in the essay I did incorporate leaders and had examples like Bill Clinton, Michael Phelps, Mark Sanford, Eliot Spitzor, and Bush/Bush Administration. I thought that was kind of a lot. </p>

<p>One thing I know I could have done better was write more, I only filled up about a page and a half. </p>

<p>If I type my essays out, would someone mind reading one or two of them and giving me feedback on it? I think the content I need is there, but my development must be mediocre.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>Read this thread. It'll answer a lot of questions:</p>

<p><a href="http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/645763-how-write-12-essay-just-10-days.html?highlight=write+essay+days%5B/url%5D"&gt;http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/645763-how-write-12-essay-just-10-days.html?highlight=write+essay+days&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p>