Does it sound bad for a hook to have the word “everyone”?
This is for my activity essay.
OK, the problem seems to be fixed.
Here’s what I wanted to say:
It should have read more like “Everyone hopes to win Lotto, but I actually did.”
But why do you need a “hook”— why not just concentrate on writing a great essay??
And these compute issues are killing me today!!!
Need context. But I prefer a great opening sentence rather than a general one, as does Stanford
https://alumni.stanford.edu/get/page/magazine/article/?article_id=31010
Would you be willing to read my essay?
I would!