Essay I really love... but does it reveal much about me? Help!

College Essays
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<p>This one is about my grandma… it’s very close to my heart but I’m not sure if it says enough about ME. Please help me on how I can improve it! Post and I’ll PM you. Thanks! :]</p>

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<p>i can evaluate it if you want.</p>

3

<p>I can provide my insights.</p>

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<p>Anyone else? Please??</p>

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<p>i’ll read it</p>

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<p>im curious. lemme see it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it too. I just finished another essay where I’m also worried about not revealing enough about me.</p>

8

<p>I’ll read it, PM me</p>

9

<p>I’ll have a read… although I am senior I have written my essay…
you are from Vancouver? me too!</p>

10

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

11

<p>I’ll take a look… I have a proven track record reading essays ;)</p>

12

<p>i’ll read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it!</p>

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<p>I can read it if you want. I’m new here but I promise I’ll do it seriously…</p>

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<p>i’ll take a look. PM me</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look.</p>