Essay makes me want to pull my hair out! Help

<p>For my essay we had to write on finding humor in life. I sat and stared at my notebook for a little over an hour, then wrote just what came to me. I read over it and it is just nothing like all of these great "sample" essays I see. I was wondering if someone would read it and see if it's even worth reading. And even just some pointers, ANYTHING to help me with this. I really appreciate it.
Thanks in advance!</p>

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