Essay On How I Made Over $50,000 In Two Years

College Essays
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<p>Purpose-driven essay looking for reviewers on stylistic issues.
Not nearly as strong as my other essays, but there is simply too much information to add a substantial amount of ‘me.’ Looking for opinions and hoping that my overcoming a struggle will trump the lack of voice.</p>

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<p>Send it over; I’ll read</p>

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<p>ill read it and give you feed back.</p>

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<p>I would love to read them.</p>

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<p>Yeah, just send it to me and I will post back.</p>

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<p>I want to read it as well.</p>

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<p>id like to read it…but no college wants to hear you brag about making money.</p>

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<p>I can critique!</p>

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<p>I know, it is purpose driven though. The money was made to pay for my education, so I’m hoping it doesn’t come off arrogant because it took a lot of humility to make it.</p>

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<p>wow, $50,000 in 2 years, amazing. I’ll critique it for ya.</p>

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<p>pm i’ll read it, besides i will know how to win money:) haha</p>

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<p>i’ll read it :)</p>

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<p>Hmm, sounds interesting. I would be happy to read and critique.</p>

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<p>I’ll critique it for you if you want…</p>

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<p>sure ill read.</p>