essay on institutional bias as problem?

<p>I’m in college. I’m writing an essay. It’s about something that should be changed at my school. Kind of like an editorial. I don’t really have many friends who I would feel comfortable reading it. Well actually I don’t really have many friends. So I’m turning to CC for, ugh, help (<em>shudders</em>) </p>

<p>So, does anyone want to read it!? Try not to PM me, as my inbox is pretty full. I’ll PM you ;)</p>

<p>1 view and 0 responses? Blasphemy! </p>

<p>I should mention that I am looking for all kinds of edits: grammar, style, rhetoric, logic, flow, whatever.</p>

<p>35 views (33 by me) and 0 responses? Bollards! </p>

<p>I should also mention that I, in actuality, find this website to be a great resource that has helped me many times before.</p>

<p>sorry for bringing your hopes up with another view (and reply! imagine that), but i totally thought someone was unearthing my (never going to happen) morbidly & discreetly cynically generated common app essay topic</p>

<p>62 views and 0 “real” responses? Bojangles!</p>

<p>I should further mention that it’s only a page long.</p>

<p>oh alright send it along then? i need a break from common app writing. actually no i just need to prolong my break from common app writing</p>

<p>90 views and 1 response? Badgery!</p>

<p>I should now mention that this is why I have no friends.</p>

<p>103 views and 1 response? Bamboozler!</p>

<p>I should probably point out that, if so desired, I will read the essay of whoever posts next in return.</p>

<p>118 views and 1 response? Blogger!</p>

<p>Please just please I need someone to tear my essay to shreds!</p>

<p>I’ll read it. If you want credentials, I’ve got none except for notoriety in my AP Lang class for harsh critiques.</p>

<p>Pm it to me if youd like</p>

<p>Do you want the critique in a PM to you? Since you said that your inbox is pretty full…</p>

<p>^Thanks for asking. It’s emptier now, so yeah PM is fine.</p>