<p>I think I should be fairly safe from plagiarism, considering. Anyway, it starts “For his seventeenth birthday, my best friend received a used car. For my seventeenth birthday, I received a leg. My name is Zachery Rufa, and I limp.” Would anyone like to read it? I would provide a critique in exchange?</p>
<p>Aww. I wanna read. Aww. I’d be so scared.</p>
<p>I know it’s long. It’s for Columbia University, specifically, with the prompt ‘give us an idea of who you are.’</p>
<p>That sounds really good, I would read if you want.</p>
<p>I’m applying there too! I have a lot of family issues. It sounds really, really good.</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to read and critique it, I’m a rising junior at a prep school but love the art of the college essay.</p>
<p>sounds amazing! can you please let me read it?</p>
<p>that sounds very special. Would you please let me read it?</p>
<p>I’ll read it! PM me! (i swear, iwon’t plaigarize. that’s stupid to sacrifice my own college app for something like that.)</p>
<p>I’ll read it gladly, PM me.</p>
<p>PM me too thx :D</p>
<p>I reallllllly want to read this</p>