<p>Would anybody care to give me any feedback please. I just finished my first draft and it needs some critiquing.=)</p>
<p>Sure! Drop me an email (hannahorenstein [at] yahoo [dot] com) and I’d love to do a critique swap. I just finished my essay today, too.</p>
<p>ok i sent it.</p>
<p>bump!!!</p>
<p>I would love to review it, please PM me.</p>
<p>k i sent it</p>
<p>Not having eyebrows?
Are your serious? o-o</p>