Essay Reader Request ❌

1 I am applying to all of the top Florida Universities such as UF, FSU, FIU, UM, UCF, and also the Ivies. My first option is UF and want to prioritize getting into there as a pre-med biology major.
2 I want help with reviewing my essay and feedback about how I can improve it. I lack advice from anybody with experience or expertise as all of my prior english teachers left the school.
3 I need feedback preferably by October 5th as I am intending to apply early action Oct 15th to multiple schools.
4 Discuss an accomplishment, event, or realization that sparked a period of personal growth and a new understanding of yourself or others. (646 words)
5 I have not yet worked with a CC Reader

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