essay revision?? please!

<p>Can someone please review my commonapp essay? I’m in dire need of help. I got rejected from both of my early schools so please help!! </p>

<p>I’m also a new user…can someone tell me how to “PM”?</p>

<p>Thank you very much!!</p>

<p>To PM you need at least 15 posts</p>

<p>oh…so…this would count as one post then? thank you for the tip!</p>

<p>jk nvm you can see the number of posts underneath the join date…don’t know how I missed that…</p>