Essay strong enough for CC?

Colleges & Universities Columbia University
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<p>My GPA is 3.91 UW…SAT 2260-1520/1600, SAT2’s- 760/740
i guess my numbers all right…i was wondering if anyone could read my essay and tell me if it was strong enough for Columbia College???.please Private message me if you would like to see my essay.thanks! as the 29th approaches i want to know what to expect…a rejection or acceptance!..thanks y’all…</p>

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<p>PM it to me. </p>

<p>I’ll take a look for you and send you some feedback.</p>

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<p>OP, where are you from (I noticed the y’all)</p>

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<p>You can PM it to me as well and I’ll take at look.</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look. Very bored atm. I’m also from Pakistan. Karachi or Lahore?</p>

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<p>can i get your email…im from LAS in LAhore</p>

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<p>Oh ok, the yall had a southern twang and I’m from the Carolinas.</p>