Essay talks about close friends and family - need outside criticization

College Essays
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<p>Hi, </p>

<p>I have an essay thats not too long, about 3/4 of a page single spaced.</p>

<p>It’s pretty personal, but I just need to know how “good” it is in general, and if it’s cliched etc.</p>

<p>Please post if you want to help, but make sure you have a good post count/have been on this forum for a good time since I’m very guarded about being ripped off.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>I’m new on the forum and a mom of a HS senior. Used to be a copywriter. Wouldn’t rip you off, but it’s up to you.</p>

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<p>anyone else?</p>

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<p>Hey,</p>

<p>I can read your essay. I might not be able to help out so much with style, but I can check it for grammar and such.</p>

<p>-auxsoleil</p>