Essay to oversee my poor start in HS?

<p>I came into high school not caring too much and got Bs and C’s… Sophomore year I Was getting As but than my father nearly passed away from lung problems. I added an essay about this topic and how it effected me that year and that’s why my grades were so low. They have since improved to As and Bs going into my senior year. Do you think that this essay will help them overlook my bad grades sophomore year.</p>

<p>Overlook is asking too much but I assume they should take it into consideration</p>

<p>I would hop so because during that time I couldn’t focus for jack… Praying it brings some answers as to why I was so bad my second year.</p>

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<p>Mine has pretty much the same message! I think it should, I mean if it’s well-written everybody’s looking for someone who has grown over time.</p>

<p>i hope soo</p>

<p>I have, and that’s what I did I slipped it in at the end and it’s more about the whole incident</p>