Essay Version 2

College Essays
1

<p>I’ve done a re write of my essay and need some people to read it and give me feedback on it. I can PM it to whoever is willing to read it.</p>

2

<p>essay version 2 to what prompt? </p>

<p>Ill read it.</p>

3

<p>Ok.</p>

<p>Could I also get some opinions from people who are already in college, who already have written successful essays?</p>

4

<p>Bump. I’d like as many opinions as possible. I’ll be turning my essay in soon.</p>

5

<p>I will read it.</p>