Essay written a year in advance! Read it?

<p>Hey guys! :)</p>

<p>I took a writing course this past summer and as a final project I decided to write my admissions essay, even if college application time is a year away.</p>

<p>I’d really like some constructive criticism. Thanks!</p>

<p>pm ill give you honest feedback =]</p>

<p>I’ll read it, PM it over!</p>

<p>Sent from my iPhone using CC</p>

<p>I’d be happy to provide some feedback. PM me.</p>

<p>I’ll read it and provide feedback. Just PM it to me! :)</p>

<p>I’d be happy to help. PM it to me.</p>