<p>Anybody want to take a look at my common app essay and tell me your thoughts and also if and how I should cut it (700 words right now). Preferably someone who’s not applying this fall.</p>
<p>I’ll be happy to take a look.</p>
<p>Sent you a PM</p>
<p>It is my pleasure as well to read it.</p>
<p>If it bothers you though, I think I will apply for transfer for fall 2013. So just tell me if it is okay for you or not.</p>
<p>i would revise it for you if you want!</p>