<p>Heyy I haven’t finished my essay…
but I’m writing about my job as a television host.</p>
<p>I’m having trouble starting it and I began it in 2 different ways.</p>
<p>Does anybody want to read the beginning? Preferably people not applying to the 3 universities… buuut hey, who else are writing about their own television show right?</p>
<p>Oh yeah and I have one essay I finished. I don’t think it’s creative enough but I would still like to get feedback on it. Its about my job as the founder & editor-in-chief of a school newspaper.</p>
<p>I think i might just shorten that and make it into the 150word activity short answer.</p>
<p>Im not applying to UC duke or cornell even though I had a dream about DUKE today for some reason LOL.
Ill take a look at your begining and your essay :)</p>
<p>lol uhhh
I had a dream about Union/Albany today thats crazy 
ill send it over PM kay?</p>
<p>If you need extra advice I’d be happy to give you some comments!</p>
<p>sent it via PM 
thanks</p>
<p>Go ahead and PM me. Are you just looking for acknowledgment of your skills or do you actually want me to provide you with some criqitue?</p>
<p>PM - sounds like an interesting experience. If you could specify in the PM whether or not you’d like a critique or a validation that would be great (I suppose the one might resemble the other).</p>
<p>you can develop it into an excellent essay. pm it over.</p>