<p>I worked hard on making an essay which was unique. I wrote about my philosophical experience with a book and a trip which changed my ideology. If anyone is interested in giving me some feedback on it, please provide me with your email address.</p>
<p>I am planning on sending it to some very competitive schools, so please be very, very tough on me.</p>
<p>Also, I prefer people with high post counts or people who are already enrolled in colleges to volunteer, because I do not want to have trouble with any cheaters who may steal some of my content. Thank you.</p>