<p>Does Anyone want to read and critique my extracurricular paragraph? It’s about electric guitar playing and generally music!</p>
<p>if you still need someone, i could!</p>
<p>anyone else wanna read it?</p>
<p>pm it to me- i play guitar too so hopefully i can be helpful :)</p>
<p>is it commonapp? </p>
<p>pm me sure. thanks.</p>