Extreme Makeover: Essay edition

<p>Ok, well I'm not sure if i want to post my essay on here, but i was wondering if anyone who wanted to look at it could give me their e-mail address. I'll be honest and say it needs work so anyone who would even give me a small note back about what they think would be excellent.</p>

<p>Also, could anyone suggest maybe a few more schools I could apply to? I'm looking into architecture so please suggest to me some schools that I could get into.
1260, 24
GPA: ~4.0 W
my prstats.com sight is under the name PrettyinPink</p>

<p>I feel like I may need a few more so anything you can think of would be greatly appreciated!</p>