For anyone with low stats who think its over!
Demographics
Gender: M
Race/Ethnicity: White
Residence: Southern California
Type of School: Competitive? private
Hooks (Recruited Athlete, URM, First-Gen, Geographic, Legacy, etc.): Academic comeback
Intended Major(s): Chemical engineering, Biochem at a few.
Academics
GPA (UW/W): With first senior year S1 (3.15/3.36) without senior year (2.9/3.15)
Freshman year GPA: 2.50
Sophomore year GPA: 2.84
I was dismissed from school my sophomore year (expelled kind of, but I finished online and came back the next year ). Honestly, for the dumbest reason, my school is very weird with some stuff.
Junior year GPA: 4.11
Senior year GPA: 4.61
Rank (or percentile): School doesn’t rank
Senior Year Course Load:
AP Biology
AP Calculus AB
AP English Literature and Composition
AP Research
US Gov (AP Test)
Woodworking 1
Law and Society
Standardized Testing
SAT: 1330
I didn’t submit anywhere, lmao. I am not a good test taker and get distracted EXTREMELY easily (very bad ADHD)
Extracurriculars/Activities
List all extracurricular involvements, including leadership roles, time commitments, major achievements, etc.
#1 online clothing business … 10k net profit … recycled old clothes that would end up in landfills.
#2 Climate Technology paid internship … pertained to my major kind of?
#3 Co-established School Environmental Club
#4 XC / Track. Since 5th grade. XC team captain. CIF.
#5 Tracking fluctuations in schools river height and measuring precipitation every morning. Graphing data-comparing over time; monitor our local ecosystem. This turned into a program/club.
I had 10 activities in all, but I think these are the main ones. (18 for UCs) I had a big theme of environmental work throughout my essays and extracurriculars, I also mentioned this in all interviews to make my application profile more cohesive.
Awards/Honors
Definitely lacking in this category
#1 AP Capstone candidate
#2 school math award
#3 league champion in the 800m
Letters of Recommendation:
Math teacher: Taught me Algebra 2 and pre-calculus for my sophomore and junior years. Spoke very highly of my growth 10/10
Spanish teacher/XC coach: Taught me Spanish in 9th, 10th, and 11th grade. Spoke very highly of my growth 10/10
English teacher: Solid, didn’t have as big of a connection with this teacher. 8/10
Interviews
I interviewed for, I think 8, schools, but I can only remember 7
Beloit: The XC coach just called me, and we talked for around 45 minutes; it went well and felt effortless.
USF: 10/10. Actually one of my best interviews; unfortunately, I don’t like San Francisco.
Chapman: I don’t remember anything from this, to be honest, but the interviewer sent me a handwritten letter after.
Oberlin: 10/10. I also talked to the XC/track coach and had to fill out a ton of stuff, and we called a few times. She said I was a great fit for the school and that she would talk to admissions. I had an interview with a student as well. I can’t remember tbh
Occidental: 7/10. Honestly, it was kind of awkward; it was my first interview, and I didn’t know what to say. It could have been worse. I talked about a rep who came to my school, and she liked that I remembered their name.
U. Rochester: 10/10 we talked about my research paper and talked over email after about it.
Syracuse: 9/10 went good, but she told me not to do engineering lol (She was nice but thought I would enjoy environmental science more)
Essays (IMPORTANT FOR ME) 10/10
I am very proud of my essays. All in all, I submitted over 70 essays, and I didn’t have to sacrifice any quality of writing. I spent soooo long working on these essays (I started at the beginning of my summer going into senior year); I studied what works best and literally thought about the psychology of admissions officers. I also read over hundreds of other essays people wrote and what worked well. I think I did the best job I could at explaining everything and emphasizing the impact I can have and the uniqueness of my situation. I think the reason I got rejected from so many schools is that I didn’t have an excuse for my poor grades early on, or at least not one worth mentioning. But I definitely had unique essays, which helped a lot, in my opinion. Sometimes, my essays were a bit risky, but I tried to be different without being cringe, and I think it worked very well.
BIG TIP: Connect your academic work to your story or personal life; I did this in interviews as well. For example, I am doing a research paper right now. I weaved this throughout my Common App essay, college PIQ supplemental essays, and interviews. You need to sound passionate when talking about said academic work as well; it shows that you actually care about this stuff and will continue to moving forward.
I am happy to share any of the essays I wrote if anyone is interested!
Decisions (indicate ED/EA/REA/SCEA/RD)
The summer going into my senior year, I was so stressed I wouldn’t be going to college because of my GPA; that is why I came up with this list. I also used fee waivers every chance I got; I probably only paid for 15 colleges (not counting UC/Calstate)
Acceptances:
Chapman University (Initially Deferred) EA
Arizona State University ROLLING
Penn State (Berks) ROLLING
Purdue University (Fort Wayne) EA
Manhattan College (+ $30k/year scholarship) ROLLING
University of Pittsburgh (Johnstown) ROLLING
New York Institute of Technology (NYIT) (+ $22k/year scholarship) ROLLING
Loyola Marymount University (Study Abroad first year) ED
Salve Regina University (+ $27k/year scholarship) EA
Rutgers University-Camden EA
*Rutgers University-New Brunswick (Initially Waitlisted) EA
Seattle University (+ $27.5k/year scholarship) RD
*UC Riverside RD
*California State Polytechnic University (Pomona) RD
Drexel University (+ $8k/year, Initially Deferred) EA
University of San Francisco (Initially Deferred) EA
American University (+ $20k/year scholarship) RD
*Illinois Institute of Technology (+ $20k/year scholarship + Honors College) EA
Pace University (+ $22k/year scholarship) EA
Syracuse University (Too expensive
Wheaton College (Massachusetts) (Honors + $40k/year scholarship) EA
*Dennison University (+ $20k/year scholarship) RD
*Kenyon College (+ $18k/year scholarship) RD
Beloit College (+ $27k/year scholarship) EA
Clark University (+ $20k/year scholarship) EA
Florida Southern College (Initially Deferred) EA
Hanover College (+ $22k/year scholarship) EA
Hobart and William Smith Colleges (+ $38k/year scholarship) EA
Ohio Wesleyan University (+ $24k/year scholarship) EA
Rollins College (+ $22k/year scholarship) EA
Waitlists:
*Virginia Tech - Waitlisted RD
*Fordham University - Deferred, then Waitlisted EA
*California Polytechnic State University (San Luis Obispo) - Waitlisted RD
*Occidental College - Waitlisted RD
Rejections:
Santa Clara University EA
University of Colorado Boulder EA
University of San Diego RD
University of Washington RD
University of Southern California (USC) (Initially Deferred) EA
Pepperdine University EA
Tulane University EA
UC Berkeley RD
UC Davis RD
UC Irvine RD
UCLA RD
UC San Diego RD
UC Santa Barbara RD
UC Santa Cruz RD
California State University (Long Beach) RD
San Diego State University RD
Rose-Hulman Institute of Technology EA
Northeastern University (Initially Deferred) EA
Clemson University (Initially Deferred) EA
Oberlin College RD
Trinity University EA
Bard College EA
University of Rochester RD
Furman University RD
Reed College EA
Colby College RD
COLLEGES WITH STARS BEFORE THEIR NAME ARE WHERE I AM THINKING OF ATTENDING, SO ADVICE IS APPRECIATED I honestly don’t know if these results are that good; I know I am below every one of these colleges’ average GPA, but still idk.