Feedback on Essay #1?

<p>Anyone mind looking at it? Wondering if it’s specific enough to UofC.</p>

<p>Sure I’ll read it…</p>

<p>I’m applying this year so if you don’t want to send it to me don’t!</p>

<p>I’m doing topic #5 though by the way… my friend did #1 though and it was really good</p>

<p>sure i’d love to help</p>

<p>I’d love to read also.</p>

<p>also, can you give me feedback on my essay also?</p>