feedback on essay common app #2 - failure

<p>any feedback would be appreciated :slight_smile: Post if you’d like to read</p>

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<p>hey, I am willing to look it over…but for better responses, it really helps to put context around this…what are your stats? what’s your intended major? what schools are you considering? That way, you pull out better reviewers. </p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll look at it</p>

<p>Sure! I agree with SouthernHope. Please message me which schools you are considering</p>