Feedback on interesting personal statement?

College Essays
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<p>can someone read my personal statement and give me feedback before I submit it? It will be worth your time I believe it is a pretty good essay.</p>

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<p>bump </p>

<p>list of schools applying to:</p>

<p>Harvard
Stanford
USC
UCLA
UC Berkeley
Northwestern
Michigan
Illinois
UNC - CH
UW Madison</p>

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<p>Sure. I’ve read a lot, and I’m pretty detailed with feedback.</p>

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<p>Sure.pm me</p>

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