Feedback on my Essay?

<p>This essay is for the “topic of your choice” at Notre Dame. I am hoping to convey my intensity and curiousity through this essay about a quirk of mine. Would anyone have time to read it? I would really appreciate it. Thanks so much!</p>

<p>OK, I’ll try it.</p>

<p>Thanks atomom! I e-mailed it to you.</p>