<p>Hi everyone,</p>
<p>I am a senior high school student in Vietnam with a dream of pursuing an education at a liberal arts college in the US. I am putting together my ED application and finishing up my application essay/personal statement . I have the final draft ready and I would be very appreciated if someone could read through it and leave some comments/feedbacks to make it better. Feel free to comment on anything that you find can be improved, including topic, structure, word choice, grammar, etc. </p>
<p>Please simply reply to this post or send me a private message; I would PM you with my personal statement. Your help means a lot to me as this school is my dream school. The ED application deadline is midnight on 11/15, so please get back to me at your earliest convenience.</p>
<p>Thank you very much for your time and look forward to your response!</p>
<p>Hanh Pham</p>