<p>Sorry for extremely long-winded topic, it’s just my terrible attempt of being unique…</p>
<p>anyways, here are my stats (feel free to comment, actually please comment…) :</p>
<p>Asian Male, CA attending Public school </p>
<p>SAT: 2240 (CR 730 W 720 M 800)
SAT II: 800 Math II, 800 US History, 790 Chinese, 780 Chemistry
GPA: 4.6 Weighted, 4.0 Unweighted (only 10-12, 4.42 9-12)
Rank: 3/515 (only 10-12)
AP: US History, European History, Calc BC, Physics C, English Language (all 5s)</p>
<p>ECs:
FIRST Robotics Team: Head Programmer
Math Club/ JPL Invention Challenge: director of JPL Invention Challenge
Science Olympiad: founded the school team this year and also the director of it
Football: only 3 years
Class Council: treasurer
Tzu Chi: Volunteer</p>
<p>Summer:
During the summer of 2005, I divided my time between exhausting football practices and an online Visual Basic class from Santa Monica City College (SMC). I spent my spare time volunteering for the Tzu Chi Charity Organization.
During the summer of 2006, I spent the first part of my summer taking a Multivariable Calculus course at SMC, allowing me to immerse myself in a college atmosphere. I also gained real life work experiences by working at my neighborhood Taco Bell. </p>
<p>Awards:
Mathfax awards for Algebra II and Advanced Math
AP Scholar with Distinction
Most Informed Spokesman at JPL Invention Challenge
Various Awards from MESA day</p>
<p>Current Classes:
Japanese III (A)
AP English Language/Composition (A)
AP Chemistry (A)
AP Government/Politics (A)
Ap Statistic (A)
Auto Shop (A)</p>
<p>Essays: not sure…</p>
<p>Outside Activity Essay or Activity for Fun Essay:
Talked about my participation in the First Robotics Competition and what I learned</p>
<p>Intellectual Essay:
Talked about how I lead a team during another scientific competition. And how I applied what I had learnt from Robotics. It sort of works together with my outside activities essay.</p>
<p>Roommate Essay:
I discussed how I became independent in my early stay in America</p>
<p>11A: discuss a quote, a state… that really impacted you
Finally, I used “the end justifies the means” I talked about how it works to a limited degree. I stated my in America as an example and used college application and my passion as a closer.</p>
<p>Recommendation: I liked them, but might be a bit trite</p>
<p>Thanks in advance for the feedback</p>