Fellows essay help

College Essays
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  1. This is for an application for a Fellows program at a SLAC
  2. Looking for feedback on topic and how it addresses the prompt and any feedback to make it better, more authentic, more likely to get me an interview for the scholarship. What should I leave out? What could I add? Does the essay answer teh prompt fully. (500 or so words, not strict to the word count)
  3. The essay is due 1/15, so I would like feedback asap.
  4. The Fellows program values passion, curiosity, and responsibility.
  • What are you intellectually passionate about?
  • Where has that curiosity taken you?
  • How do you take responsibility for the future growth of your passion(s)?
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