Film school essays - please read

<p>I’m applying to film school and the two short essays I wrote are far from perfect… and must be submitted next week. </p>

<p>If you could take the time to read and offer your input, it’d be much appreciated.</p>

<p>BUMP</p>

<p>Anyone…?</p>

<p>i’ll take a look at it just pm me.</p>

<p>Thanks a million : )</p>