Final Draft of UC App - Need to Cut Off 100 Words

College Essays
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<p>Would someone please be willing to read over my Final Draft of my UC app and cut off about 70-100 words. I’ve read over it again and again, but I just can’t kill my baby =/</p>

<p>No Seniors or younger please.</p>

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<p>ya sure pm it</p>

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<p>thanks but no thanks, I see you have threads about studying for the SAT</p>

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<p>Just go through your essay and delete anything that you’ve already said. For instance, if you’re asking people if they’ll do something, it’s redundant to also ask if the’re willing, and when you’re giving a range, you don’t have to specify that it’s not strict.</p>

<p>Check for passive voice, too.</p>

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<p>butchered it down to 739. I’m done I can’t bear to kill my baby anymore.</p>