Final draft on my vassar essay(very short only about 100words)

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<p>Final draft on my vassar essay(very short only about 100words). Can somebody do a final check on my grammar and make some comments? Thx to all, merry xmas</p>

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<p>sure, pass it over.</p>

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<p>Sent’‘’…</p>

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<p>wouldn’t mind…</p>