Finally done with my 500 word personal statement!

College Essays
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<p>This is THE final draft. My teacher really liked it, and so did pretty much everyone else I showed. However, I knew all of these people. So, would any of you anonymous and unbiased people like to read it over and critique/comment on it? It would be very much appreciated!</p>

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<p>i’ll read it.</p>

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<p>send it on over =)</p>

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<p>Sent to both of you :)</p>

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<p>pm me if you will. is this for commonapp personal statement? thanks.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it.</p>

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<p>i’ll critique! pm me :)</p>

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<p>Sure, just pm me.</p>