Finally done with my first essay

College Essays
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<p>Would anyone like to critique my first rough draft? </p>

<p>It’s for the Common App essay prompt “Evaluate a significant experience, achievement, risk you have taken, or ethical dilemma you have faced and its impact on you” and I wrote about my experience with a blood donation.</p>

2

<p>Sure. PM it over.</p>

3

<p>I love editing! PM me :)</p>

4

<p>sounds interesting, i’ll read it (PM)</p>

5

<p>sure suresuresure</p>

6

<p>I will take a look; send a PM!</p>

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<p>I remember the first and only time I donated blood :frowning: I fainted.</p>

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<p>Feel free to PM It.</p>