"Finding My Voice" - Critique it please?

College Essays
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<p>I had previously posted my essay publicly like an idiot… I hope no one stole it…</p>

<p>Anywho… I am seeking people who can read it and critique it.
I’ll PM it to you.</p>

<p>Thanks! :D</p>

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<p>BUMP! 10char</p>

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<p>The title sounds kinda cliche. Either way, I’d be willing to read it, though I’ll be applying this year too. I already finalized my essay topics though, and I’m WAY too lazy to rewrite. It’s your call. I’m up to the task though :)</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>I’ll read it…</p>