Finished my first essay! Critique?

College Essays
1

<p>First of all, I dread dread dread word counts… that frustrated me the most about this already grueling process. Does anyone want to read my essay? (500 words).</p>

2

<p>I’ll take a look. PM it to me.</p>

3

<p>Okay, PM, ma’am.</p>

4

<p>Sure. Feel free to PM it.</p>

5

<p>I’ll do it.</p>

6

<p>I’ll read it. PM me. :]</p>

7

<p>I’ll read it! PM me!</p>

8

<p>PM me, I’ll read</p>

9

<p>I think I already read something of yours this week, but if you send a PM I’ll read whatever you’ve got.
I need to keep the noodle sharp for college…and reading all the 09 app essays is a great way to feel useful.</p>

10

<p>I’ll take a looksie, pm me</p>

11

<p>i’ll take a look
pm me</p>

12

<p>PM me, i’ll read it</p>

13

<p>PM me, ill be happy to read it</p>