<p>I’d like some feedback on my first first first draft of my personal essay for schools like georgetown (EA), UMASS, cornell, colgate, towson, and UDel.
I’d mainly just like some thoughts about my choice of narration, tense, and overall message. Like I said above, it’s my very first draft, filled with parts that can and will be improved. PM me if you’d like to read it! Thanks</p>
<p>also, I am going to be a biochem major, hence the science aspect of it</p>