First drafts are all I do... Read and review?

<p>So, I’m done with the first draft of my personal essay… it took a week of thought, and an hour of typing.
Anyway, is anybody willing to tell me how it is? Also, whether it says anything at all about me, and, if so, what?
Rest assured, though, I’ll be working on it for a lot longer. But feedback on the initial approach appreciated.</p>

<p>PM me your essay and i’ll offer some feedback</p>

<p>I will take a look and critique. PM it to me.</p>

<p>Can someone offer a quick review?</p>

<p>Seriously, people, it’s not all that bad…</p>

<p>I’ll take a look.</p>

<p>^ Thanks. Anyone else?</p>

<p>Quelque mots seulment, s’il vous plait.</p>