First essays ever, need some help!

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I just wrote a rough draft of my common app essay and attempted a UoC supplemental essay. (The one about Waldo)</p>

<p>I’ve never written college essays before, so I know these aren’t going to be perfect, especially since their just first drafts.</p>

<p>But with that said, I really need some people to help me look them over, so if anyone is interested, just let me know!</p>

<p>Ill take a look</p>

<p>Great! Anyone else?</p>

<p>sure, have some free time</p>

<p>I’ll look at it!</p>

<p>I can take a look and will critique it for sure if you want me to.</p>

<p>i can take a look</p>