I have to many “be” verbs. I have changed some of the nouns for this post.
"Being a Minnesotan at a Canadian school has been an interesting experience. I have enjoyed being different from anyone else at my school. "
Please re-write without “be” verbs.
<p>“As a native Minnesotan at a Canadian school, I underwent the unique experience of being different from any other student there.” </p>
<p>I don’t like “be” much ^^; Best of luck!</p>
<p>It has been an interesting experice to attend a Canadian schoool (specify school–high school, grammer, middle, just pick one.)
as a native “Minnesotan.” </p>
<p>I found/find it enjoyable to be different from the other students at my school.</p>
<p>just one more… "I have learned that I dont need to BE like everyone else… "</p>
<p>“As a native Minnesotan at a Canadian school, I’ve always been different from everyone else.”</p>
<p>You still use “be” but it’s in a different form so not as noticeable. If you want to get rid of “be” altogether, try something along the lines:</p>
<p>“As a native Minnesotan at a Canadian school, I’ve always stuck out like (insert simile)”</p>
<p>For the second sentence:
“I’ve learned I don’t need to act like everyone else” or
“I’ve learned I don’t need to fit in all the time.”</p>
<p>Thanks, i finished the essay and finally submitted it!!!</p>
<p>sabrinas was the best i think…</p>