Focus of essay?

College Essays
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<p>As I am writing my essay, I am wondering, is it better to focus on one small incident to convey that my summer was meaningful, or would it be better to talk about my summer in general?</p>

<p>The thing about writing about a small incident is that what I have described does not seem like a “significant” experience (but it is part of a really good summer experience), but when I write about my whole summer it starts sounding extremely cliche.</p>

<p>Sorry I cannot provide specifics, but in general, which is better?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance for any input!</p>

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<p>What is significant for one could be trivial for another</p>

<p>If the one small incident is significant to you and you can clearly articulate its impact, then go for it! Personally, I think one specific anecdote is a lot more revealing then talking about one’s entire summer. Remember depth not breadth!</p>