Would it be too boring to talk about how I changed the way the people in my life view homosexuality and their stance on gay rights by being open minded and allowing people to have negative beliefs about who I am until they see for themselves that there is nothing wrong with me because I am a leader at my school and etc. I would talk about how it was difficult for me to assume all of the leadership positions I have now and how I was friends with many people who opposed my sexuality. Would they think I’m too passive or that I’m trying to sound like Gandhi?? The essay might be boring
Your post sounds like a big run-on sentence! Try to get a single good idea to write about and revolve your whole essay on that. You sound like you have multiple ideas going and your essays going to end up all over the place. I think it’s a very interesting topic though, and good writing is never boring.
It pretty much was a run-on sentence haha but thanks.