Gah I fail!!!

College Essays
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<p>So for once I actually enjoyed the essay prompt. I thought I could fit this in at the beginning and still have room to complete the essay.
"I know this is rather unprofessional, but I’d like to start off by thanking the creators of the essay question. Quite frankly, most of the prompts I’ve been handed in my short life have been rather vague and boring, at this time I’d like to make an honorary mention of the College Board. It’s a nice change to be a tad bit enthusiastic about writing a paper. I think this might be the first time that I’ve simultaneously smiled and written an essay at the same time! So enough of my rambling, I’ll go ahead and address the question now. "</p>

<p>So I finish writing that, it didn’t take long, but still it sucked when I checked that is was over 500 words. Leaving me with 200 to answer the question. lol</p>

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<p>Just take that segment out, it deludes focus from whatever you’re going to talk about, and makes it seem like you’re trying to just make the 500 word count.</p>

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<p>I took it out completely. My actual response will hit the mark, as I actually do enjoy the topic :)</p>